Part 9 of my story is up on the xanga page.

Here's an excerpt:

The moment was agonizing. With my eyes closed, I only had her image to guide me. I could sense her waiting for it, eyes closed, her breath halted for that moment when our lips would touch and electricity would flow between us. The sensual slow seconds of sealed lips, I could think of no other way to be closer to another being...

So... yea. Go read.